Hey, how are u?
When you say which one works better can you clarify what you mean? Is this deviation part of the Fragments project?
Both look good btw I should state. Good drawings
In a way the left one looks very suitable for when she grows up (12 years old) and the right one looks suitable when she is younger (10 years old). It kind of both compliments each other on how much she has changed between 10 years old and 12 years old.
If this isn't about the Fragments project then just shout at me lol. But you make it look easy with both styles of drawing on using pencil and ink. If you want me to decide on choose one, I will have to say pencil but they are both good and it is a really difficult choice. You drawing with ink and pencil is very good